This is something new for me. I am challenging myself to try new things and to write a little each day. I hope you enjoy.
Eyes downcast, shoulders hunched
No access, boxed off
Speakers once blaring, suddenly releasing honeysuckle sweet melody
No hesitation, senses set alight
Chest arches in anticipation
Him waiting beyond arms outstretched
Inner being vibrating with necessity of movement
The sensual intake of breath before she unleashes her She
Strong purposeful strides until eyes upon her graceful curves
Anticipated rise and fall of chest, eyes travelling to meet his wanting
Outstretched hand, fearless proposition
Confident acceptance, hands sparking connection
Travelling in tandem
To the sweet spot, fiery core
Sweet rhythmic beats flooding in
Thrown back, leg extending Heavenward
Electricity sparking, lightning fighting
Room pulsing with questioning intentions
Away she spins, too quick for the taking
After her, him in suspense-filled pursuance
Drawn in, closer still
Mouse to cheese, honey to bees
Magnets
Current flowing back and forth
Hearing harmony, fragmented
Smelling heat, yearning
Seeing beauty, raw
Tasting discovery, salacious
Feeling spirits, colliding
Synergy
Indistinguishable distance amidst
Chests heaving
Vision impenetrable
She became his
Such beautiful words.
As someone who writes about nudity — a short story on my blog is about a woman who goes naked in order to better understand herself — it is thought-provoking to read a portrayal of sex like the one here, since nudity and sex tend to go hand in hand.
But, back to your poem:
I really get a sense of the connection between these two. Human beings are driven to give all of themselves to each other, and I would say that your words excellently capture that drive, and the satisfaction that is a result of it.
Hiya. Thank you so much.
Ooh I’ll definitely have to have a read 🙂
Yes! This piece is actually describing a man’s pursuit of a woman to dance. I tried to show that you can express sensual love through other means than sex.
Thank you again so much 😀
You’re welcome. 🙂 Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Thank you, too, for explaining what the piece is about. 🙂 That’s one of the beauties of art: it can mean so many different things.